Revise writing into academic register

Revise these sentences into academic register.

Rules:
1. Remove colloquial and emotive phrasing.
2. ***Match claim strength to the evidence.*** Where the evidence is weak but the sentence says "demonstrates", lower it to "suggests" and **say why you lowered it.** *This is the most common reason a reviewer pushes back.*
3. Where the subject is "I", convert to the form conventional in this field below.
4. Split sentences carrying two claims.
5. **Do not change the content. Do not add evidence that is not there.**
6. Output a table: original / revised / reason.
7. End with a separate list: **sentences that need more evidence.**